Writing 3, Second Task. (Descriptive Text with Adequate, Inadequate, & Coherence)

The way to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate unity : 

• Unity :
  

Unity refers to the extent to which all of the ideas contained within a given paragraph "hang together" in a way that is easy for the reader to understand. When the writer changes to a new idea -- one which is not consistent with the topic sentence of the paragraph -- the writer should begin a new paragraph. Unity is important because it aids the reader in following along with the writer's ideas. The reader can expect that a given paragraph will deal only with one main topic; when a new paragraph begins, this signals that the writer is moving on to a new topic.

How to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate unity:

When you write a paragraph, you should put into three of component of paragrpahs namely : Topic Sentence, Body or supporting sentence, and concluding sentence. Explain and support the topic sentence. Develop a paragraph in main idea. Express this idea in topic sentence. Support the main idea of the paragraph with details.

it can conclude that paragraph is a the combination more than 2 sentence in writing  which every sentence related each other and develop on one main idea.

A coherent paragraph has sentences that all logically follow each other; they are not isolated thoughts. Coherence can be achieved in several ways. First, using transitions helps connect ideas from one sentence to the next. For more on transitions, see the Write Right on Transitions. Second, ordering thoughts in numerical sequence helps to direct the reader from one point to the next. Third, structuring each paragraph according to one of the following patterns helps to organize sentences: general to particular; particular to general; whole to parts; question to answer; or effect to cause. 

 

• Descriptive Paragraph :

Hello! I am Tiara :)

Hello guys, hello my blogy^^ this time, I will tell you about myself  :D  I consufe where to start it hehe.. hmm okay, I think the first I will start from introduce my name hehe  :D

My name is Tiara Liza, my nick name is Tiara, I am 19^th years old, I was born in Metro city on October, 14^th 1994 and then my father’s name is Drs. Zainuddin and my mother’s name is Lise Ariani. My father’s job is civil servant. Actually I have many nicknames, my senior high school friends call me “Puket”, an'd my university friends call me “Titah” , and sometime they call me “Angelina Jolie”, because they said my lips like Angelina Jolie’s lips hahaha :D it is sounds very silly hahahaa :D and in my house my family also call me “Titah”. Actually in my origin “Titah” mean old sister. So, all of my young brother and my young sister call me titah. Now, I  am university student on Muhammadiyah University especially on english department and I am in 4^th semester.My origin is from Lampungesse and that is my father origin, my mother origin is Javanesse and my religion is Islam. I live at Metro city, especially on Way Pengubuan street No.16, 21 East Metro. I live with parents and my young brother. Physically, I have light brown skin, and my eyes colour are black. My hair is long and straight. My blood type is O. I have height about 158 cm, and my weight around 45 kg. Other people siad that I am tall enough. People say that I am thin. My body is not ideal because my weight just 45 kg, I sholud increase my weight. Actually I eat al lot, but do not why it is hard to increase my weight.  I have many hobbys such as chatting, reading, wathing movie, slepping, shopping and many more. I also like listening to the music. I prefer English music, because it can increase my ability to speak english. Because I am English student. All of those about me. As a student in Teacher Training and Education Faculty especially in English department, I have studied hard to increase my ability in english, always pray to Allah SWT, doing what I can and what I love, and always improve myself to be a better person in the future. And I will make my  parents proud of me. I think that’s all the best thing of me.

Note :

Pink colour : Tittle

Purple colour : Introducing

Blue colour : Identification

Red colour : Description

Black colour : Concluding