WRITING 3 ( 4th Assigment)

WRITING 3 (MEETING 4)

Name   : TIARA LIZA

SRN      : 12340031

In this next task I will write some story about my achievement in my life. This writing use narrative text. The purpose of this writing is to entertain the reader, tell about my experience, and give motivation to the readers that everyone can get their own achievement.

My Achievement.

Hay guys! I would ask you, what is the achievement that you have got in your life? Yes I thought every people have some achievement in their life. In this beautiful occasion I would tell you about my achievement. It happened a few months ago. And this made me very happy and proud.

One day I got a short message service from the leader of ASES  brother Heri Purnomo. For your information ASES is organization for Muhammadiyah university student in English education study program . In the short message service, brother Heri told that all members of ASES  should gathered after class end to attend the meeting. After class end , I and my friends gathered in room to attend the meeting. It turns out that in this meeting we discussed about following some contest at one of the universities in Lampung and we will represent Muhammadiyah university . There are several branches of the contest that followed, there are debate , scrabble , speech , and wall magazine . After that we decided who are the student will followed the contest. And I never thought I had chosen to follow wall magazine contest. In this contest needed 1 gruop which consists of 3 people, Me, Indah Maharani my classmate , and Sister Annisa from 7th semester . After decided who will follow the contest , the meeting finally ended and will process with the preparation in the next day.

Because the time was getting close, the next day  I was always practicing and preparing everything to be better prepared. Indah, sisters Annisa and I began making wall magazine concept to which my group and I will brought at the contest. When I prepared everything, bro syarief also helped us to do everything that we needed.

And finally the contest day came. At 7am I and my friends were gathered in our beloved campus to went to where the race begins together. I and my friends went there by UM’s mini bus. Around one and a half hours we arrived to Bunda Delima Nursing Academy, Bandar Lampung. When arrived there I got a little guidance. After that I and my group entered the contest room. For wall magazine competition the participants were given about 2 hours to work to complete the wall magazine. And the contest began, my group and I do it carefully for maximum results as we want. Because my group and I have a good cooperation and compact we could finish well and on time. After the time was over, the judge call each group to present the wall magazine. With the theme of “safe our environment” we could present it well. and the announcement of the winner will be announced in the next day.

The next day I went there again to find out if my friends and I got a winner or not. And this was the best surprise I ever got besides a birthday surprise hehehe .. My friends and I did not think that the wall magazine team get 3rd winner. It was the first achievement I got while studying at university of Muhammadiyah. And the more pleasure this was the first trophy that my friends and I gave to our study program. But unfortunately my friends and I are still a little bit disappointed because  have not got a winner in other branches of the contest. But my friends and I are still grateful that could get in the championship contest in wall  magazine.

And finally I brought home our trophy. I was very happy and proud because I was able to achieve this achievement. I am very thankful to God and grateful to my friends who have helped our group in that contest.

Identifying text :

-          Tittle                     :  My Achievment

-          Theme                  :  Achievement

-          Plot                       :  Forward

-          Setting                  :  1. In meeting room

                                  2. In our beloved Campus Muhammadiyah University

                                  3. On the way

                                  4. Bunda Delima Nursing Academy

-          Character              : 1. I (Tiara Liza)

                                 2. Indah Maharani

                                 3. Sister Annisa

                                 4. Brother Heri Purnomo

                                 5. Brother Syarief

                                6. My friends

Language features of the text :

1.      Using Past tense                                   : All of the verb on that text use V2 form

2.      Using action verbs                                : told, gathered, made, etc.

3.      Using specific participants                     : I, my friends, my group

4.      Using time conjunction                          : next day, day came, etc.

Identifying paragraph :

1.       INTRODUCING PARAGRAPH

Hay guys! I would ask you, what is the achievement that you

 have got in your life? Yes i thought every people have some achievement in their life. In this beautiful occasion i would tell you about my achievement. It happened a few months ago. And this made me very happy and proud.

2.       TOPIC SENTENCE

And I never thought I had chosen to follow wall magazine contest.

3.       CONTROLLING IDEA

In this contest needed 1 group which consists of 3 people , there are me, indah maharani my classmate , and sister annisa from 7th semester .

4.       SUPPORTING IDEA

-          For your information ASES is organization for Muhammadiyah university student in English education study program . In the short message service, bro heri told that all members of ASES  should gathered after class end to attend the meeting. After class end , i and my friends gathered in room to attend the meeting. It turns out that in this meeting we discussed about following some contest at one of the universities in Lampung and we will represent Muhammadiyah university . There are several branches of the contest that followed, there are debate , scrabble , speech , and wall magazine . After that we decided who are the student will followed the contest.

-          For your information ASES is organization for Muhammadiyah university student in English education study program . In the short message service, bro heri told that all members of ASES  should gathered after class end to attend the meeting. After class end , i and my friends gathered in room to attend the meeting. It turns out that in this meeting we discussed about following some contest at one of the universities in Lampung and we will represent Muhammadiyah university . There are several branches of the contest that followed, there are debate , scrabble , speech , and wall magazine . After that we decided who are the student will followed the contest.

-          And finally the contest day came. at 7am I and my friends were gathered in our beloved campus to went to where the race begins together. I and my friends went there by UM’s mini bus. Around one and a half hours we arrived to Bunda Delima Nurisng Academy Bandar Lampung. When arrived there I got a little guidance. After that I and my group entered the contest room. For wall magazine competition the participants were given about 2 hours to work to complete the wall magazine. And the contest began, my group and I do it carefully for maximum results as we want. Because we have a good cooperation and compact we could finish well and on time. After the time was over, the judge call each group to present the wall magazine. With the theme of “Safe Our Environment” we could present it well. and the announcement of the winner will be announced in the next day.

-          The next day we went there again to find out if we get a winner or not. And this was the best surprise I ever got besides a birthday surprise hehehe .. I and my friends did not think that the wall magazine team get 3rd winner. It was the first achievement I got while studying at university of Muhammadiyah. And the more pleasure this was the first trophy that we gave to our study program. But unfortunately we are still a little bit disappointed because we have not got a winner in other branches of the contest. But we are still grateful that could get in the championship contest in wall  magazine.

5.       CONCLUDING SENTENCE

And finally we brought home our trophy. I was very happy and proud because I was able to achieve this achievement. I am very thankful to God and grateful to my friends who have helped our group in that contest.

Okay guys, that's all story about my achievement. Thanks for your nice attention. And i hope you can give me suggestion about my writing in this story ^ ^

And this is My Wall Magazine ^_^