WRITING 3 (MEETING 4)
Name : TIARA LIZA
SRN
: 12340031
In this
next task I will write some story about my achievement in my
life. This writing use narrative text. The purpose of this writing is to
entertain the reader, tell about my experience, and give motivation to the
readers that everyone can get their own achievement.
My Achievement.
Hay guys! I would
ask you, what is the achievement that you have got in
your life? Yes I
thought every people have some achievement in
their life. In this beautiful occasion I
would tell you about my achievement. It happened
a few months ago. And this made me
very happy and
proud.
One day I got a short message service from the leader of ASES brother Heri Purnomo. For your
information ASES is organization for Muhammadiyah university student in English
education study program . In the short message service, brother Heri told that all
members of ASES should gathered after
class end to attend the meeting. After class end , I and my friends gathered in
room to attend the meeting. It turns out that in this meeting we discussed
about following some contest at one of the universities in Lampung and we will
represent Muhammadiyah university . There are several branches of the contest
that followed, there are debate , scrabble , speech , and wall magazine . After
that we decided who are the student will followed the contest. And I never
thought I had chosen to follow wall magazine
contest. In this
contest needed 1 gruop which consists of 3 people, Me, Indah Maharani my
classmate , and Sister Annisa from 7th semester . After decided who will follow
the contest , the meeting finally ended and will process with the preparation
in the next day.
Because
the time was getting close, the next day I was always practicing and preparing
everything to be better prepared. Indah, sisters Annisa
and I began making wall magazine concept
to which my group and I will brought at the contest. When I prepared
everything, bro syarief also helped us to do everything that we needed.
And finally the contest day came. At 7am I and my friends were gathered in
our beloved campus to went
to where the race begins together. I and my friends went
there by UM’s mini bus. Around one and a half hours we arrived to Bunda Delima Nursing
Academy, Bandar Lampung. When arrived there I got a little guidance. After that
I and my group entered the contest room. For wall magazine competition the
participants were given about 2 hours to work to complete the wall magazine.
And the contest began, my group and I do it carefully for maximum results as we
want. Because my group and I have a good cooperation and compact
we could finish well and on time. After the time was over, the judge call each group
to present the wall magazine. With the theme of “safe our environment” we could
present it well. and the announcement of the winner will be announced in the
next day.
The next day I
went there again
to find out if my friends and I got a winner or not. And this was the best surprise I ever got besides a birthday
surprise hehehe .. My friends
and I did not think that the
wall magazine team
get 3rd winner. It
was the first achievement I got while studying at
university of Muhammadiyah. And the more
pleasure this was the first trophy
that my friends and I gave to
our study program. But unfortunately my
friends and I are still a little
bit disappointed because have not got a winner in other
branches of the contest. But my friends and I are still grateful that could get in the championship contest
in wall
magazine.
And finally I brought home our trophy. I was very happy and proud because I
was able to achieve this achievement. I am very thankful to God and grateful to
my friends who have helped our group in that contest.
Identifying text :
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Tittle : My Achievment
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Theme : Achievement
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Plot : Forward
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Setting : 1. In meeting room
2. In
our beloved Campus Muhammadiyah University
3. On the way
4. Bunda Delima Nursing Academy
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Character : 1. I (Tiara Liza)
2. Indah Maharani
3. Sister Annisa
4. Brother
Heri Purnomo
5. Brother Syarief
6. My friends
Language features of the text :
1. Using Past tense
: All of
the verb on that text use V2 form
2. Using action
verbs
: told,
gathered, made, etc.
3. Using specific
participants
: I, my
friends, my group
4. Using time
conjunction
: next day,
day came, etc.
Identifying paragraph :
1. INTRODUCING PARAGRAPH
Hay guys! I would
ask you, what is the achievement that you
have got in your life? Yes i thought
every people have
some achievement in their life. In this beautiful
occasion i would
tell you about my achievement.
It happened a few
months ago. And this
made me very happy
and proud.
2. TOPIC SENTENCE
And I never thought I had chosen
to follow wall
magazine contest.
3. CONTROLLING IDEA
In this contest needed 1 group which consists
of 3 people , there are me, indah maharani my classmate , and sister annisa
from 7th semester .
4. SUPPORTING IDEA
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For your information ASES is organization for
Muhammadiyah university student in English education study program . In the
short message service, bro heri told that all members of ASES should gathered after class end to attend the
meeting. After class end , i and my friends gathered in room to attend the
meeting. It turns out that in this meeting we discussed about following some
contest at one of the universities in Lampung and we will represent Muhammadiyah
university . There are several branches of the contest that followed, there are
debate , scrabble , speech , and wall magazine . After that we decided who are
the student will followed the contest.
-
For your information ASES is organization for
Muhammadiyah university student in English education study program . In the
short message service, bro heri told that all members of ASES should gathered after class end to attend the
meeting. After class end , i and my friends gathered in room to attend the
meeting. It turns out that in this meeting we discussed about following some
contest at one of the universities in Lampung and we will represent Muhammadiyah
university . There are several branches of the contest that followed, there are
debate , scrabble , speech , and wall magazine . After that we decided who are
the student will followed the contest.
-
And finally the contest day came. at 7am I and my friends were gathered in
our beloved campus to went
to where the race begins together. I and my friends went
there by UM’s mini bus. Around one and a half hours we arrived to Bunda Delima Nurisng Academy Bandar Lampung. When arrived there I got a little guidance. After that
I and my group entered the contest room. For wall magazine competition the
participants were given about 2 hours to work to complete the wall magazine.
And the contest began, my group and I do it carefully for maximum results as we
want. Because we have a good
cooperation and compact we could finish well and
on time. After the time was over, the judge call each group to present the wall
magazine. With the theme of “Safe Our Environment” we could present it well.
and the announcement of the winner will be announced in the next day.
-
The next day we went there again to find out if we
get a winner or
not. And this
was the best surprise I ever got besides a birthday
surprise hehehe .. I and my friends did
not think that the wall magazine team get
3rd winner. It was the first achievement I got
while studying at university of Muhammadiyah. And the more
pleasure this was the first trophy
that we gave to our study program. But
unfortunately we are still a little bit disappointed
because we have
not got a winner in other branches of the contest. But we are still
grateful that could get in the championship contest
in wall
magazine.
5. CONCLUDING SENTENCE
And finally we brought home our trophy. I was very happy and proud because
I was able to achieve this achievement. I am very thankful to God and grateful
to my friends who have helped our group in that contest.
Okay guys, that's all story about my achievement. Thanks for your nice
attention. And i hope you can give me suggestion about my writing in this story
^ ^
And this is My Wall Magazine ^_^
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